There was some interference with the recording such as scratchiness or voices in the background. The timing matches with the pictures and the pictures are all related to the topics. It was very interesting, I learned about many things such as the Lock Lovers Bridge, which I had no idea about before this video. There is music during the credits, and everything is correctly cited.
Well, I guess I'll start with images. They were pretty good, but the video was missing transitions, and there were a couple timing mishaps. Audio was very good--You were very easy to understand, and the you maintained a constant speed. You described your topics well. Oh! I forgot to mention-I liked your introduction. Let's see...you had music, work was cited...Well, I guess that's my critic! All in all, I was very nice.
I LOVED YOUR OPENING QUOTE!!! I think you spoke pretty clearly and at a nice speed, but there was some background noise, and at times, there was some static. You had about everything required, with the exception of the transitions. If I was to grade yours I would give you an A- at least. Nice work!!!
Hannah Ramsey – Loved your introduction and you had a nice paint picture. 1. Northern lights – great job bring in facts with your personal feelings. Great pictures. 2. Writer – hope you do, I’d like to read it. Good job with your scipts. 3. Lovers lock bridge – why do they hate it so much. Good detail 4. Monument in Paris – so interesting. 5. Marathon – good luck! 6. Climb a mount – good details 7. 7 wonders – loved it – great pictures Your timings were off on this one. 8. Olympics – pictues caught up 9. Volunteering – wonderful 10. Australia – on my list too Recordings – very nice job. Volume was uniform. Speed was a little too fast but easily understood. You really did a nice job on your script. I enjoyed listening to what you had to say. Music and copyright law followed. Very well done. 98
There was some interference with the recording such as scratchiness or voices in the background. The timing matches with the pictures and the pictures are all related to the topics. It was very interesting, I learned about many things such as the Lock Lovers Bridge, which I had no idea about before this video. There is music during the credits, and everything is correctly cited.
ReplyDeleteWell, I guess I'll start with images. They were pretty good, but the video was missing transitions, and there were a couple timing mishaps. Audio was very good--You were very easy to understand, and the you maintained a constant speed. You described your topics well. Oh! I forgot to mention-I liked your introduction. Let's see...you had music, work was cited...Well, I guess that's my critic! All in all, I was very nice.
ReplyDeleteI LOVED YOUR OPENING QUOTE!!! I think you spoke pretty clearly and at a nice speed, but there was some background noise, and at times, there was some static. You had about everything required, with the exception of the transitions. If I was to grade yours I would give you an A- at least. Nice work!!!
ReplyDeleteHannah Ramsey – Loved your introduction and you had a nice paint picture.
ReplyDelete1. Northern lights – great job bring in facts with your personal feelings. Great pictures.
2. Writer – hope you do, I’d like to read it. Good job with your scipts.
3. Lovers lock bridge – why do they hate it so much. Good detail
4. Monument in Paris – so interesting.
5. Marathon – good luck!
6. Climb a mount – good details
7. 7 wonders – loved it – great pictures Your timings were off on this one.
8. Olympics – pictues caught up
9. Volunteering – wonderful
10. Australia – on my list too
Recordings – very nice job. Volume was uniform. Speed was a little too fast but easily understood. You really did a nice job on your script. I enjoyed listening to what you had to say.
Music and copyright law followed. Very well done.
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